So things are rather busy today in my life and I'm hoping to get my query letter perfected. Thanks to all of your help and to Mathew over at The Quintessentially Questionable Query Experiment I hope to get my query letter perfected and ready to submit. So I have taken your comments and updated my query letter and Mathew has posted it on his blog to get another round of comments. I have seen his critiques in the past and they are very helpful. They are not only helpful to the person with the query letter but to those reading his blog. So if you are not already following check it out and follow.
Also Elana Johnson has helped me out tremendously on both my query letter and my book. She may take another stab at my query letter seeing if it has improved. BTW check out her blog her new book was recently released and is amazing. Here is a link to her blog.
So be prepared to learn from my mistakes and check out the critique and comments tomorrow.