tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post8295231882736533282..comments2023-11-03T03:00:50.926-07:00Comments on Josh Hoyt: Writing ChallengeAuthor Joshua Hoythttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01256754228034053632noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-11733139696494456102011-05-05T21:35:26.366-07:002011-05-05T21:35:26.366-07:00Pure awesomeness!Pure awesomeness!Dianahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00950934503254500613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-3288495928407798542011-04-25T18:29:01.126-07:002011-04-25T18:29:01.126-07:00Love the mystery evoked in the last paragraph.Love the mystery evoked in the last paragraph.Deniz Bevanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17134553551048836979noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-68512515286836991582011-04-23T11:29:29.328-07:002011-04-23T11:29:29.328-07:00Nicely done - I liked the ending with him facing a...Nicely done - I liked the ending with him facing a darkness that only he can stop. :-)Crystal Cheveriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18192120363495262035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-77935658382637151872011-04-23T08:40:27.624-07:002011-04-23T08:40:27.624-07:00Rachael -thanks it was a great challenge.Nicole- T...Rachael -thanks it was a great challenge.<br>Nicole- Thanks it was fun to write<br>Nofretri - I agree it always amazes me how many ideas come from one thing.<br>Zan- Thanks for visiting. The forest can be such a lovely place and also very scary :)Josh Hoythttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01256754228034053632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-68932501867528855222011-04-23T07:32:58.137-07:002011-04-23T07:32:58.137-07:00Wow! Josh! This is wonderful. And the blog is the ...Wow! Josh! This is wonderful. And the blog is the perfect setting to post it in. LOL! We all seem to be in the forest with our challenges.Zan Mariehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00166450116524323462noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-48847019090421266012011-04-23T06:58:29.211-07:002011-04-23T06:58:29.211-07:00*WOW* There's speed in that little scene! Grea...*WOW* There's speed in that little scene! Great!<br><br>... and isn't it intriguing, how different every one deals with the same specifications? :-)<br><br><a href="http://nofretiri.blogspot.com/2011/04/abc-s-for-show-not-tell-crusader.html" rel="nofollow">Karin @ Nofretiris Dream Of Writing</a>Nofretirihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13501880982112851227noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-26614685907081266152011-04-23T05:18:40.485-07:002011-04-23T05:18:40.485-07:00Lots of tension and sensory description here. Wel...Lots of tension and sensory description here. Well done!~Nicole Ducleroir~http://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-44435804734439607262011-04-23T01:23:33.998-07:002011-04-23T01:23:33.998-07:00Hey Josh, great piece of showing :) I was right th...Hey Josh, great piece of showing :) I was right there with your MC - I particularly like the flashback to his love!<br><br>Hugs,<br><br><a href="http://rachaelharrie.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Rach</a>Rachael Harriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16764930101064527321noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-77314910709047743652011-04-22T19:04:16.722-07:002011-04-22T19:04:16.722-07:00I like the atmosphere of the story. Great job!I like the atmosphere of the story. Great job!Kerri Cuevhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-52232176465295631032011-04-22T17:13:26.621-07:002011-04-22T17:13:26.621-07:00Nicely done Josh. I enjoyed the imagery you paint...Nicely done Josh. I enjoyed the imagery you painted. <br><br>Check out mine when you get a chance.<br><br>Lisa<br><a href="http://inspiredbylisa.blogspot.com/2011/04/show-not-tell-fiction-challenge.html" rel="nofollow">Inspired by Lisa</a>Lisahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14287714494263781046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-45652647908141623242011-04-22T16:50:18.265-07:002011-04-22T16:50:18.265-07:00Great challenge. Thanks for the follow.Great challenge. Thanks for the follow.kmckendryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07534751311630921447noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-75286093839905485392011-04-22T14:41:09.190-07:002011-04-22T14:41:09.190-07:00Great story Josh... really gripping from the start...Great story Josh... really gripping from the start and full of feeling. Lx<br>P.S I wanna see a video of you feeding the snails(!)Laurahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03604785269958873474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-41873155284371654952011-04-22T14:36:36.455-07:002011-04-22T14:36:36.455-07:00Great story!! Have a great weekend!Great story!! Have a great weekend!MJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04647627174443420783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-51956217096866711892011-04-22T14:36:36.284-07:002011-04-22T14:36:36.284-07:00Nicely done. It takes a lot of skill to concisely...Nicely done. It takes a lot of skill to concisely convey an idea without just out and saying it. Very nice.Meegan, the Evil Stepmotherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04044706351219990718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-72147216487697884412011-04-22T14:34:03.887-07:002011-04-22T14:34:03.887-07:00You've made me very curious about what your he...You've made me very curious about what your hero is facing. Intriguing.M Paxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14096697282530998519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-49596995703973519562011-04-22T14:20:52.665-07:002011-04-22T14:20:52.665-07:00Oooh, great job!Oooh, great job!Jennifer Shirkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16970585847385511795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-69081213995004108112011-04-22T12:56:16.120-07:002011-04-22T12:56:16.120-07:00Great writing! I love all the sensory details.Great writing! I love all the sensory details.The Golden Eaglehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-30921447972337091142011-04-22T11:22:05.854-07:002011-04-22T11:22:05.854-07:00Stunning, Josh. You did an awesome job of showing ...Stunning, Josh. You did an awesome job of showing and not telling. I especially like this, 'Time stands still as he watches the small red droplet fall to the ground. How has it come to this? There is no substance in this?'<br><br><a href="http://www.elliegarratt.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Ellie Garratt</a>Elliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03731071128348213067noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4170828505844723150.post-47199997623139673852011-04-22T11:21:15.340-07:002011-04-22T11:21:15.340-07:00Great job here - I love that you were able to get ...Great job here - I love that you were able to get across the immediacy of it without being in 1st person!Sierra Gardnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16364930724666386832noreply@blogger.com